The single effect you get from the short film is a lesson to be optimistic and appreciate the little thingds right in front of you.
Three specific examples that led to this single effect were 1- Ben was smiling and happy as his fellow sign holders looked dull and unhappy 2-How he said it was beautiful and he noticed the little details. 3- At the end as he packs up optimistic for a sendoff, when it seems he won't get one he is still happy, but finally he does get his sendoff and to talk to the girl right in front of him.
If i could change one aspect it would be to have something unfortunate to happen to Ben, but he would still be optimistic This would make the effects emphasized more.
Mike,
ReplyDeleteNice support points for your single effect. Another way you could structure that sentence is by using a colon to inroduce your list. "There were three specific examples that led to the single effect:.." and then you list them off. You can also separate those items by semicolons or periods. Interesting change you would make, but I was looking for something that didn't change the plot or dialogue. Other entries have been good. Keep digging deeper into these thoughts and ideas.